Lordant's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eonian Sweven]

Wonderful composition, love every aspect of it! Best of luck :)

LucidShadowDreamer responds:

Thank you so much! Best of luck to you too <3

[plegaria]

Sorry for delay!

Great use of electronic elements like bells and keyboards. Sometimes I feel like the different parts of the song don't blend well enough, the best examples are 0:04, 1:00, 2:12. I think it might be better to do more smooth arrangement transitions in that case, like gradually adding individual instruments, or just making more arrangement-related transitions. For example, you could make a short and unobtrusive build-up before the pause on 2:12 with more drop synths. Also, the overall structure is a bit unpredictable, not a bit complaint though.

As I said earlier, I like the sound design here, especially the use of bells and keys. What I don't like is the arragement in several parts. At the 0:59 you have an unexpected change to a different arrangement, with electronic bass and almost no rhythmic elements. It sounds decent on its own, but doesn't blend well enough with the previous part, and the bass/saws here are a lot louder. The 1:36 part is nice, although it's a bit unnecessary at that time, as there was no drop yet. A bit too much noise here, and bells should be a little more quiet. Sometimes vocals, keys and bells combined make a mudd in the middle freq (~800hz).

The drop is cool, but the sound design variety is not a strong point here. I think you used too many similar synths here, especially the saws, which makes the climax weaker. What I would recommend to do is to experiment more with balancing, make less necessary voices like arps less out of the mix and probably change the sound itself to make it less similar to others (to chords in your case). Also the mix here is a bit much reverberated, especially the drums, and the bass could be brighter and more complex.

Among the more global things that I didn't like, I want to mention the vocal processing. It's unique and distinctive on its own way, but I think there is too much distortion anyways. It might be better to work a bit more on it, or maybe alternate it with different, more distant processing variations. Also the mix is very tight for almost a munite, and the rest of the song could have more panned synths too, especially in the drop.

Overall, you've written a unique song with many interesting sound design and composition choices. My main complaints here are about the mix and arrangement. Also the structuring has potential to improve, as the song progression is a bit akward (at least for me). Anyways, you did a great job, thanks for coming to NGUAC!

Kiiri responds:

i can't thank you enough

[Eclipse [NGADM 2023]]

Great stuff, I really like it! Good luck at round 1

Benji-G responds:

Thanks man! Good luck to you as well.
Sad they reshuffled the groups since we're no longer up against eachother in this round. But hey, we'll both make sure to make it to round 2 so we might go up against eachother then xd

[The king's tale]

I like how you made sixth melodies, it sounds nice and memorable. Although I think it's a little overused throughout the second half, but the instrument variety works pretty well, and it's not very conspicuous. The melodic content is probably one of my favorite elements here.

The chord progressions and harmonization are good, nothing else to say. The development is a bit slow-paced, but the orchestration is solid, I would only prefer a bit more filled texture at the second half (2:12, for example) and less static strings (0:52). Also, woodwinds (especially at the end) are a bit loud.

Overall, it's a solid orchestral work, good job!

EagleGuard responds:

Hi there, thanks for taking your time to write such a lengthy review! I definitely get your points and I will try to keep them in mind for future orchestrations. I have to admit that I still have a lot to learn in the orchestration department (particularly keeping the sound organic), but I'm very glad you enjoyed the piece overall!

Thanks again for your review, it's much appreciated!

[Hero's Journey - NGADM Round 1]

Oh, I love that kind of music. I have no complaints about arrangement/mixing, some transitions are not perfect, but the modulation sounds fine and the composition itself is fairly balanced.

Lovely work, well done and good luck!

Santi-Montali responds:

Thanks dude! Yeah there are a couple things I could tweak, I'll do that after the judging haha

[Summon the Troops]

One of your best works 👍🏻

Benji-G responds:

Wow thanks a lot! :]

[(Club) Dedicated To All]

Неплохо, продолжай в том же духе
Ре-минор — сила

ClubbinMusic responds:

Хорошо!

[Rise [NGADM Round 1]]

I found intro longer than I expected. Melodic stuff is fine, although I wished for more instruments playing solo part in intro and outro, not only piano. The drop is nice, I liked everything, especially pitch changing :]

Good luck at NGADM!

Benji-G responds:

Thanks a lot man! :]