Great remix! Love how you used cinematic elements here, and the background synth fits the drops just perfectly

Wonderful composition, love every aspect of it! Best of luck :)

Sorry for delay!

Great use of electronic elements like bells and keyboards. Sometimes I feel like the different parts of the song don't blend well enough, the best examples are 0:04, 1:00, 2:12. I think it might be better to do more smooth arrangement transitions in that case, like gradually adding individual instruments, or just making more arrangement-related transitions. For example, you could make a short and unobtrusive build-up before the pause on 2:12 with more drop synths. Also, the overall structure is a bit unpredictable, not a bit complaint though.

As I said earlier, I like the sound design here, especially the use of bells and keys. What I don't like is the arragement in several parts. At the 0:59 you have an unexpected change to a different arrangement, with electronic bass and almost no rhythmic elements. It sounds decent on its own, but doesn't blend well enough with the previous part, and the bass/saws here are a lot louder. The 1:36 part is nice, although it's a bit unnecessary at that time, as there was no drop yet. A bit too much noise here, and bells should be a little more quiet. Sometimes vocals, keys and bells combined make a mudd in the middle freq (~800hz).

The drop is cool, but the sound design variety is not a strong point here. I think you used too many similar synths here, especially the saws, which makes the climax weaker. What I would recommend to do is to experiment more with balancing, make less necessary voices like arps less out of the mix and probably change the sound itself to make it less similar to others (to chords in your case). Also the mix here is a bit much reverberated, especially the drums, and the bass could be brighter and more complex.

Among the more global things that I didn't like, I want to mention the vocal processing. It's unique and distinctive on its own way, but I think there is too much distortion anyways. It might be better to work a bit more on it, or maybe alternate it with different, more distant processing variations. Also the mix is very tight for almost a munite, and the rest of the song could have more panned synths too, especially in the drop.

Overall, you've written a unique song with many interesting sound design and composition choices. My main complaints here are about the mix and arrangement. Also the structuring has potential to improve, as the song progression is a bit akward (at least for me). Anyways, you did a great job, thanks for coming to NGUAC!